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i am me.an unknown person.anonimous,for ever to be blamed for something that i couldn't do...
lost a part of me,feeling empty on the inside, because i have to pay instead of being forgiven.
this is not what's love about.forgive and forget, but no...instead let's hurt each other, blame
and curse...stupid lovers,can't you forgive? ohhh it's done...and gone...yes i understand but
what about the feelings? Erase? yes/no i don't know. i want my heart back. i want no regrets, no
sadness, please don't go. and still, there's nothing to forget, to lose in time, to throw to
the garbage bin, to hate, to cry for, to wait...it's only empty, rotten.close the door. but give
me the key. because i miss...just wait and see...it will come back. i can barely stand the
sensations...kissing and bitting...god it hurts on the inside.confused; don't disappear! don't
take it away! don't! please don't kill...don't...don't go...it's small and rotten... i'll close
the door and throw the key...you'll regret that.let me love you, hug you, kiss you, let me do it.
because i miss...
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love story...

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:iconanymys-symyna:
foarte frumos scrisa... imi da impresia k pur si simplu cuvintele...curg fara k tu sa le fi dat o anmumita forma "artistik" fortat, asa qm se mai inatmpla uneori... iar faptul k nu este o simpla fabulatie, k are un substrat autentic, o face cu atat mai frumoasa.

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nobody cares if you're miserable, so you might as well be happy...
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multumesc mult pentru apreciere! este singura mea "scriere". si intr-adevar este scrisa exact in momentul in care simteam acea avalansa de senzatii, amintiri, imagini si durere privind despartirea. am scris-o la scoala,aproape plangand in timpul orei pe o hartie murdara si mototolita luata de pe jos. cineva m-a convins sa o transcriu aici.

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To live is to die!
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:iconthescarletprince:
hmmm what can words say when such speaks to me this way.
A very good work.

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... often when I write I am trying to make words do the work of line and colour. I have the painter’s sensitivity to light. Much (and perhaps the best) of my writing is verbal painting. ~Elizabeth Bowen~
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oh thanks , you really make me blush...it's my first work of this kind...

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To live is to die!
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I like it a lot, I can tell it has a lot behind it.

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... often when I write I am trying to make words do the work of line and colour. I have the painter’s sensitivity to light. Much (and perhaps the best) of my writing is verbal painting. ~Elizabeth Bowen~
:iconfuckfashion:
yeah and u also know a little bit of my story

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To live is to die!
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:iconthescarletprince:
I figured that bit played a big part in this work. Its harsh and forlorn, kind of like how it still feels I imagine. It also hints at a strong resolve, something i also know you have just by what you've told me. Your a stong person and it shows.

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... often when I write I am trying to make words do the work of line and colour. I have the painter’s sensitivity to light. Much (and perhaps the best) of my writing is verbal painting. ~Elizabeth Bowen~
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:iconthescarletprince:
You should feel great :XD: I get the impression you don't get to feel that enough and I'm glad I could make you smile again ^^ Well hey, I might not be there but I am around, ears when you need them. I can believe that about the communists, look at the russians, someone once said that they seem to be in love with with their own suffering. It stinks so people have a right to be sad, I'm just sorry they take it out of each other.

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... often when I write I am trying to make words do the work of line and colour. I have the painter’s sensitivity to light. Much (and perhaps the best) of my writing is verbal painting. ~Elizabeth Bowen~
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i saw that some people want sadness more than happiness. weird...

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